The Younger Potter Twin–Review
Author: Dr. T
Story: The Younger Potter Twin
Summary:The Heir of the Founders, the Heir of Merlin, needs to set the future straight — by going back to 1971.
This story can be found in Madam Pince’s Library in the R section. Below is the direct link to the story:
http://www.fantasyficworld.com/r-rated-novels.html
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Reviews:
**Marvolo Riddle**
Posted: 19 Nov 2006 10:13 am Post subject: Chapter One
Another fabulous story by T
I really like the way you take hold of the reader right away with your plots, T. No fooling around with unnecessary development. Ginny’s fate, and Ron and Harry’s estrangement are established within 30 seconds of reading. Well done, especially because it makes the reader want to know what happened - the effect every storyteller wants, isn’t it??
A VERY interesting theory Harry has formulated is disclosed in a meeting between Harry, Remus, Luna, Tonks and Hermione. As the plan unfolds, the detail and structure of the “what if” Harry and crew are plotting, to this reviewer, shows that a lot of thought was put into this plotline by T, for which we readers are, of course, grateful.
Note - ANY story that bears out the existence of the Crumple Horned Snorkack is TOPS in my book, T. Thank you!!
My my! Ron has some true bitterness stored up inside him; I can’t wait to read how this happened, and if there will EVER be a chance at reconciliation.
Without giving away any spoilers, all I can say is that the stage is set, and the pieces seem to be in position.
Let the game begin!!
Tremendous job as usual, T.
Marv/Mike
DrT
Posted: 19 Nov 2006 10:50 am Post subject: Re: Chapter One
There will be a ‘reveal to future folks’ in chapter 17.
Ados
Posted: 03 Dec 2006 08:58 pm Post subject:
Really nice story, looking impatiently forward to new chapters
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