The Return–Review
Author: Seritha
Story: The Return
This story is PG-13 and can be found in Madam Pince’s Library under Novel Length fics as well as Drama, Action/Adventure, and Romance. It ships Harry and Ginny. Below is the story summary.
Summary:Ginny Weasley is Head Girl of Slytherin. What she wasn’t expecting was the who the Head Boy was going to be.
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Reviews:
*~*N.Cole*~*
Posted: 27 Nov 2006 04:04 pm Post subject: Prologue and Chapter 1
Overall, a very strong intro that leads the reader to want to read on.
An interesting twist on how you managed to spare Lily and James from Voldemort’s wrath. I like the thought of Harry still having his parents around. In my opinion, the poor bloke has enough to worry about being the “chosen one” and all.
I also like how you paint the charrie of Ginny Weasley. I never really cared for her character as JK Rowling writes her. I’m not quite sure why…but anyway…. I REALLY like the way YOU have written her. Could I be partial because you made her a Slytherin?? LOL
*~*N.Cole*~*
Posted: 27 Nov 2006 04:13 pm Post subject: Chapter 2
I love the descriptive and vivid terms you use when you describe the nightmares Ginny is experiencing. I can literally hear the screams and see the images playing out in my head. VERY COOL.
I have to say, I can’t seem to put this fic out of my mind. It makes me want to keep reading and reading. Excellent job here.
*~*N.Cole*~*
Posted: 27 Nov 2006 04:17 pm Post subject: Chapter 3
I couldn’t help but laugh when you had Ginny arguing with herself about her feelings for Harry. It was too sweet. Again, I NEVER liked the idea of Ginny and Harry being together until I read this fic.
All in all, another finely written chapter that kept me wanting to read on!
*~*N.Cole*~*
Posted: 27 Nov 2006 04:27 pm Post subject: Chapter 4
WHOA! Professor Snape (my snapeypoo) assaulted Ginny! Say it isn’t so!!
I nearly died of heartbreak when I read that…LOL
Seriously though, in this chapter we begin to see the strong connection forming between Ginny and Harry, and it is truly endearing. I don’t know what it is about how you wrote them, but I found myself cheering them on and cursing out the end of the chapter for ending with their attempt to acquire a “private little moment” together.
I seriously couldn’t put this fic down. More chappies coming soon!! So my thoughts to everyone: keep on reading and reviewing!! This is a GREAT fic!
Seritha
Posted: 27 Nov 2006 08:10 pm Post subject:
aww thanks princess! That was so sweet!
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